LO: use adjectives and adverbs to make the reader want to continue reading.
Word of the day: Perseid
“ Leave me alone, I’m about to watch the lights on the sky!” Pauline bellowed. Pauline is an ignorant 22 year old that still lives with her parents that are about to turn to dust and always wants things to go her way, no matter what. Pauline wanted to watch the Perseid that was about to happen. Perseid only happens once a year in August and it’s very rare. “ Pauline Crellie Jones come here at this instant!” Yelled her mum.
“ But I want to see the Perseid!!”
“Who cares”
As soon as her mum said that the Perseid happened. Pauline ran as quick as a lightning bolt, when she eventually reached her destination which was the hill, she was too late.
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