For today's quick write we had 5 minutes to create a piece of writing about an inventor. The sentence starter that was given to us was: "The cats out of the bag now"
“The cats out of the bag now” whispered Sven. Sven is actually Bill Nye the science guy in disguise. Sven had made cats that change colours when you tap them, Sven made his terrific invention 6 months earlier. Sven and his “sidekick” Eric went to the NYC science lab and put the cats they stole from a crazy cat lady into a machine. The machine looked perfect, but once they had pressed a button to start it up everything started to malfunction. A few sparks leapt out onto Sven’s $12000 Gucci lab coat and burned 3 holes in it, after a few hours the cats came out. They looked normal at first but when they touched them they changed colours. That’s how Sven and Eric ended up with colour changing cats today.
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