Billy Bobby Jones is a very famous synchronised swimmer and he has never ever made a single mistake in his entire life. He has won 22 gold medals, 3 silver medals and 1 bronze medal. He is that talented he has only won 1 bronze medal, one day BBJ was assigned to go to Argentina for the synchronised swimming Olympics.
Hi it is me Sophie I like how you started off your quick write maybe you could add some more detail and I really like how you added in how many metals he has won so good job from Sophie
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