Friday, March 16, 2018
Pick a path story (Haunted House)
Overall I think I did a good job. It was really fun making a pick a path, it was also my first time. Next time I want to add more description and less deaths at the end. Although I struggled a bit and sometimes I found it challenging through out the process it was very enjoyable.
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Hi Mary I like how your story is creepy and it is fun to in to lots of different door and rooms which you can get killed or make out alive. It was a lot of fun reading your pick a path.Next time you could put more description on what the person in the room looked like but I think your story was awesome. From Sophie
ReplyDeleteHey Sophie,thanks for reading my pick a path and commenting.
DeleteI will take that advice and use it in the future.
Thank you so much
From Mary