Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Lake Brunner School in Moana, near Greymouth, NZ.
Friday, October 27, 2017
Thursday, October 26, 2017
Wednesday, October 18, 2017
It's cruel to keep animals in zoos, speech
During term three we have been focusing on persuasive writing. We all had to choose a topic to write on for our upcoming speech. For my speech I decided to choose a topic on zoos, which was It's cruel to keep animals in zoos. When I first started to work on my speech I had trouble coming up with some ideas, but I eventually got some help from the teacher which really helped a lot and I also checked some websites about cruel zoo facts and put it into my own words. I got a lot of good feedback from my classmates and they said that I used a lot of repetition in my speech which made the message go through to people, well done and I definitely made an impact on the audience, but there's always room for improvement. Next time I should have a clearer voice so that people can hear me better and use some more complex words to make my speech more interesting. Overall I'm happy with my results and I hope that I'll do more better speeches in the future.
Monday, October 16, 2017
Maths Investigation MD & LF
Six more people got 12 - 14 claps than 6 - 8 claps
The least amount of people got 0 - 5 claps
More people got 9 - 11 claps than 15 - 16 claps
Only five people didn't get 12 - 14 claps
The same amount of people got 0 - 5 claps and 15 - 16 claps
Saturday, October 14, 2017
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